Good use of colour scheme, shot well framed and using direct address. Masthead should be bigger than strap line, italicised coverline text is difficult to read. Image slightly warped.
i like what you have done with the front cover and the effects on the image and i also like how everything is laid out however i think it might look better if the fonts used were close to the same.
A sexy cover star with a direct gaze was used for the cover, 3 colour scheme convention has been conformed to. Anchorage of the main image has been done. To improve perhaps a skyline and web site link could be used. AND FINISH THE CONTENTS PAGE/COMPLETE WORK ON TIME.
Good use of colour scheme, shot well framed and using direct address.
ReplyDeleteMasthead should be bigger than strap line, italicised coverline text is difficult to read. Image slightly warped.
your contents page needs to have a similar font with your magazine cover
ReplyDeleteyour contents page needs to have a similar font with your magazine cover
ReplyDeletei like what you have done with the front cover and the effects on the image and i also like how everything is laid out however i think it might look better if the fonts used were close to the same.
ReplyDeletegood image used on the front page, keep fonts consistent and use a consistent colour scheme
ReplyDeletethanks guys
ReplyDeleteThe cover star look purple, it would be better to keep the image simple. The colour scheme is good and the coverlines are well distributed.
ReplyDeleteA sexy cover star with a direct gaze was used for the cover, 3 colour scheme convention has been conformed to. Anchorage of the main image has been done. To improve perhaps a skyline and web site link could be used. AND FINISH THE CONTENTS PAGE/COMPLETE WORK ON TIME.
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